first try
Jan 26th 2012 17:19
i stared Lnag-8 first.
i have learned English for a long time but i am not used to writing. i just did reading and listening. i really want to meet good frieds, because i will have much trip so i want to have many friend all around the world. and also it will be fun to have foriegn friends living in korea. i stared to study TOEFL. this must be very helpful
i have learned English for a long time but i am not used to writing. i just did reading and listening. i really want to meet good frieds, because i will have much trip so i want to have many friend all around the world. and also it will be fun to have foriegn friends living in korea. i stared to study TOEFL. this must be very helpful
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i stared Lnag-8 first. This is my first time using Lang-8.
I have been learned learning English for a long time now, but I am still not used to writing.
I just did learned how to reading and listening. ~~ Or, you can just combine the last two sentences. ~~ I have been learning English for a long time now, but my focus has been on reading and listening comprehension. I am still not that comfortable with writing in English.
I really want to meet/make some good friends. because I will have much many trips so I want to have many friends all around the world. ~OR~~ I really want to make some good friends so when I travel around the world, I will have friends all over.
and also It will also be fun to have foreign friends living in Korea.
I have started to study for the TOEFL.
This must be very helpful.
why 'and also it will be fun to have foriegn friends living in korea.'
this sentence is wrong?
I also try not to start sentences with conjunctions. This website should be able to explain it better than I can: http://www.dailywritingtips.com/can-you-start-sentences-with-%E2%80%9Cand%E2%80%9D-and-%E2%80%9Cbut%E2%80%9D/
Hope that helps!