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i can't know how to use this site well

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of 꿈이있는자유's latest journal entries Jan 26th 2012 23:06
i can't know how to use this site well ...
how can i check message and what is the community..?

and i want to make a many friends bot it's hard to fine same age or similar age.

i feel korean is really hard words to the foreign, and korean is really beautiful.

probably, if there some university student living in seoul, contact me !
Jan 27th 2012 00:14 TheBigFish

  • i can't know how to use this site well
  • I don't know how to use this site well

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  • i can't know how to use this site well ...
  • I don't know how to use this site well...

 

  • how can i check message and what is the community..?
  • How can I check message and what is the community?*You will get a message when you refresh your homepage screen when you receive message and the community are the different groups on this site.

 

  • and i want to make a many friends bot it's hard to fine same age or similar age.
  • and Plus, I want to make a many friends but it's hard to find same age or similar age.*Sorry about that, but I think if you keep looking you can find someone your age.

 

  • i feel korean is really hard words to the foreign, and korean is really beautiful.
  • I feel Korean is really hard words to the for foreigners, and but Korean is really beautiful.

 

  • probably, if there some university student living in seoul, contact me !
  • Probably, If there are some university students living in Seoul, contact me !

 
Good job. Make sure you capitalize proper nouns. When using conjunctions you want to keep the ideas similar to one another, unless you are contrasting the ideas. If you keep using this site, I am sure you can figure out the system. You post stuff you want corrected and people will correct your entry and you should reciprocate by correcting others. I mark things in blue as suggestion and red as grammatical error. Good luck with your studies!
Jan 27th 2012 18:18 쟁이쟁이

  • and i want to make a many friends bot it's hard to fine same age or similar age.
  • Also, I want to make a many friends, but it's hard to find people of the same age or similar age.

 

  • probably, if there some university student living in seoul, contact me !
  • probably, If there are any university students living in seoul, contact me ! 중앙대! 우후!! ㅋㅋㅋ

 
Jan 28th 2012 00:42 꿈이있는자유
probably, If there are any university students living in seoul, contact me ! 중앙대! 우후!! ㅋㅋㅋ
^_^ what is your major? my friends will be 중앙대학교 학생!
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